Monday, August 9, 2010

Gothique Assignment: Schizophrenia

The man in the coat
Came in and said
Things are mixed up
Inside my head.

But he is confused
How can he not see?
That evil witch..
she torments me.

And that little twit says
She doesn't wanna hurt me.
But I see all that blood
And a face full of glee

She's always yelling,
See all your pills?
They're here in this cup.

Tablespoon, teaspoon
We're gonna bake a cake.
I don't want that damned needle
Take it yourself for ****'s sake!

Did you leave the oven on?
Don't let the cake burn!
I've got some medicine.
It's of no concern.

Edit: Woohoo! I won the round!!


  1. WOw Panda, that is the best poem out of all the rounds by far ! Also, your pic rocks. I love it, everything about it.

    I do wonder though with the current trend of scoring how it will go for you.

    I think I am going to drop. I'm not any more happy with the assignment now then hen I read it a week ago. Also, the idea that next assignment would involve poems is daunting and NO Fun for me. Also, I don't like the attitudes of a couple of yeah.

    I was gonna post it, but I saw your pic and was worried that my dropping would take the thunder from your AMAZING pic. That pic rocks.

  2. Aaaawww Seren you are always so sweet and always considerate of others' feelings. You also always manage to make me feel confident about the work I've done, no matter what the scores say.

    That being said, my initial reaction is to encourage you to continue on. Heck if I thought I could get by with it, I'd write the poetry for you. But that's the selfish Panda. I just love seeing your stuff. If you are not enjoying the competition, I see no point in you continuing on. I will support you no matter what you choose to do.

  3. Oh my gosh! JK that is soooo awesome! You rock girl :)

  4. I'm sorry Panda, if I sounded negative before. I've really loved each of your pics for Gothic and have been really surprised at the scoring, is all. I was sure you had that last round..and the first. Hehe they aren't even my pics, but I feel robbed.

  5. hehe its okay :) :) I'm just happy to know someone enjoyed them lol

  6. Wow JK. You really outdid yourself with this one! That poem is all sorts of delicious, you clever lass.

    I would be incredibly surprised if you didn't win this round.

  7. lol it would be nice but I am up against some pretty talented folks. It's driving me nuts because I know everyone else turns theirs in last minute. :) I'm glad everyone likes it so much :D :D