Have been contemplating unattended and want to know a few things from you guys before I move foreword.
1: have been thinking about changing the name. Just adding a word or two, like, "The Unattended Past" or "Past Left Unattended". What do you guys think?
2: I know I started the story from Ian's point of view and then totally changed it up. Now it's way more focused on Saffron. Should I come full circle and end it back with Ian narrating? (the focus is still mostly about Saffron). Or just finish from her pointbof view? Or continue to tell from multiple perspectives?
I think those are my two main questions. I'd love and appreciate anybfeedback!